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Battle is Dumped

The Dungeon Hive- Volume 2 Ghostman 1108Words 2024-03-29 18:55

  The idea I had for the final battle consisted of the demons and the Kin combining their forces to fight the human army. Battling to a stalemate, the Fire Hive creates a Boss (Phoenix, Fire-Bird or Dragon) that rose from the top of the volcano and it would swoop down burning the humans. A combo victory for the Demons, Kin, and Hives.

  After writing most of the battle, I came to the sad conclusion that it just wasn`t any good. It wasn`t funny, thrilling, or exciting. It was crap. I have to redo the whole scene for the book and hopefully come up with something better.Unauthorized tale usage: if you spot this story on Amazon, report the violation.

  So I`m going to skip the battle and go straight to the aftermath of the battle which leads to the epilogue and setup the opening of Book 3. This requires a skip in the story and I`m sorry about this but I don`t want to finish writing a part of the story that I`m going to dump anyway. If readers want, I`ll put up what I had finished of the battle on RRL before going on to the aftermath but please be warned that it is pretty short and unedited.

  Thank you.

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