Just a few Tid Bits
I don`t know if you noticed this but Jafar` and the Lamp and genie` was the same person. Advisor Rick wanted to have the power but also granted Alison another identity, one that helped her get back into the palace. I suppose that can be taken a few ways&
Actually, Advisor Rick is not dead&He`s detained`&Does he still have a future? Jafar became a genie, someone with ultimate power but could not use his power unless someone wishes and/or wishes him free so&What could the Advisor become in a land without magic but with the same meaning?
Lupis was desert to make up for the Arabian nights` type of scenery. I needed more sand in the story to make it closer to Aladdin`. (Probably still wasn`t enough)
Obviously, Milo is like Abu. I really didn`t know what animal to make and he did not even appear in Cid Rellah`, so I was even considering no animal at all but&No way! I needed an animal that helped the MC! So, I thought Milo being a mouse was a great idea! (I`m thinking Milo helped Alison a few times from even going into places at all because he did all the work&)
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The time when they fly on the magic carpet and sing`, is the time playing games in the palace. One, it is the reverse and two, I wanted the characters to spend time together. I wanted to show the difference between them. Cid being relatively quiet, David louder. A side to the Prince where he`s sly&That sort of thing. The song` part was when they were up in the tower, I suppose.
David did the teleport to the ice` part, instead of Alison. There`s no ice but he did get taken away. The men that was supposedly been watching him disappeared because Advisor Rick was no longer a leader` to them.
This was mostly all typed out in a week! (Not including editing) Suppose it is small, but it does start in Cid Rellah` and continues in the next books too.
Probably a question you all want to ask: Did Elton and Alison sleep together before marriage? (It does say there was proof) Well, proof would obviously be the sheet but still, it doesn`t mean that they slept together (As they could have just got their finger or something to bleed and never took any clothes off!)
Hahaha, I wonder how many people want to know the real fact! Did they&Or didn`t they!?
And what about when she came back? Did they do it then? Hahaha&Yeah, this is fun, I`m not going to tell!
How I came across the title for the book: (This was written before chapter one)
FOR THE TITLE: (Normally known as Aladdin) (Aladdin and the wonderful lamp) (Person and then the magic that fixes everything)
Alison and the Scandal: A Prince`s Wish Granted (?)
Alison
Alison: Her scandal, the Prince`s Wish Granted. (?) < LIKE
Diamond in the Rough (nailed it!)
Anyway, tell me what you think of my Aladdin` type setting, in reverse, with no magic&